cm punk is now here

Logan Hugh: hello and welcome to hws along side Rick Hardy we have a great match's for you tonight

Rick Hardy: Logan don't you know that there is a new star in hws tonight and Greg Hudson is interviewing him tonight, here he come's now


he's theme song you can hear, and now he's now here


entrance

you hear a thunder of lightning then the mist clears away and standing there with a microphone is the apex predator cm punk anacon device

Greg Hudson: today i am going to be interviewing the new star of hws cm punk!!!

Greg Hudson: how does it feel to be the new star in HWS cm punk?

cm punk: it feels amazing i am over the moon because now i am here, i am going to dominate and then become the new HWS champion!!!!

the fans boo cm punk and says he should get of the ring

cm punk: oh shut up i don't want your input fans

Greg Hudson: so cm punk do you claim that you will beat everyone else in the roster and you be champion?

cm punk: i don't think so i know so!!!

Greg Hudson: thank you for your time cm punk

cm punk: it's OK

cm punk drops the microphone and leaves the fans are still booing cm punk

Dude,im not the gm for this fed, and gm don't do interviews its the interviewers

is it better now

It's a start!

what can i do to make it better

k, here's what you should do to make it better, instead of just coloring the characters name.. color the whole dialogue and bold the character name like how you do on your own's cm punk dialogue..and the interviewer are Greg Hudson not Logan and Rick.. Logan And Rick are commentators.. and instead of the commentators say his action, just write the actions and italic it.. i hope this helps

better now